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For all the moments that we shared,
For all the times you thought I never cared,
For all the days and nights we had,
For all the times we were happy and glad.
This is for you.

Cuz those moments meant so much,
Cuz in glad we stayed in touch,
Cuz i meant the things I said,
Despite the thoughts in your head.
This is for you.

For all the good times still to come,
For all the days in which we'll have fun,
This is for you.
This is for us.
©2008-2009 ~Silhouette-AD
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Author's Comments

Ok here's something new. And it's not bitter! lol It's "for you" so enjoy!
Sil.

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:iconxx-paulxx:
nice


very gud

as usual x
:iconanya-the-strange:
Reminds me of "Why" by Annie Lennox. Good stuff :heart:

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Do you find something funny about the word "Tromboner"?!
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why thank you too. cant say i've read that one... google time! thanks anya xx
:iconanya-the-strange:
No no, sad song lyrics. Got it on me mp3

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Do you find something funny about the word "Tromboner"?!
:iconrmrippers:
I may be a bit tipsy, but I can still crit poetry!

Gosh you're right it isn't bitter! There's a coupl of typos and the rhythm goes a bit in places, but it's got a nice atmosphere to it.

You can't help but wonder if there's a specific 'You' this was intended for, but I feel that about all generic-audience poems I read.

Keep up the poeming though :)

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But that was the problem with my dreams. They were always too realistic.

I’ll stick to my faux crème doughnut instead of my chocolate fondant

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