You appeared to be an angel,
A rose amongst the weeds,
But even though you are beautiful,
We both know were the Devil laid his seeds.
It seemed that when you smiled,
The Sun and Moon would shine,
But Shade had broken your heart,
And you were soon to break mine.
Now when you smile,
A shadow spreads across your face,
It turns out you were fallen,
A tempter from another place.
Your kiss cut me deep,
Your words deeper still,
And like a vampire you left,
Once you had had your fill.
You had embraced me with you charms,
And with the things you do,
And as you entwined me in your arms,
We both said I love you.
But now I know you were lying,
You told me Id been used,
I cant even tell you,
The after thoughts I mused.
If theres one thing I learnt from you,
Its that every rose has thorns,
Some however have more than others,
This is what my tale warns.














Comments
i think most people can feel like this at times.
its a great poem mate
terri x
The title really interested me as well. I have my own Shade (he's the sorta spooky character in my sketches) and he represents the pain of my Past and all that jazz.
So yeah, all in all very intriguing *thoughtful*
PS.
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But that was the problem with my dreams. They were always too realistic.
Ill stick to my faux crème doughnut instead of my chocolate fondant
ace imagery tho, very poignant !! well dun, keep em coming!!
I especially like "Now when you smile, A shadow spreads across your face". It conjures up some interesting images.
...oh yeah and its me, Amy!
Loves!
oh and could you add me cause ive not got a clue how to
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This is a good moment, shall we hug?
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