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I've told you how I feel,
My heart as transparent as glass,
And now away from me you reel,
Making me feel like a foolish ass.
I told you that I loved you,
I thought you felt the same,
But you didn't did you?
You made love a sadistic game.

Maybe not a game, but you know exactly what I mean...
You took my heart and cracked it,
Then smashed it like a porcelain figurine.

It's pieces scattered across the floor,
There no hope any more.

Where's the bandage?
©2008-2009 ~Silhouette-AD
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Author's Comments

Another poem for you all. Slightly different to the others but still on the theme of "love hurts".

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:iconanya-the-strange:
Love hurts like a bitch apparently, Mr Angsty :heart:

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:iconterri-vale:
hehehe yep a bandage will always heal a broken heart :) great poem, like the rhyming sequence
:iconsilhouette-ad:
Mr Angsty? I enjoy writing this shizz now lol.
xxx
:iconmerrickfairy:
Mr Angsty! That's an awesome name.
I like this. It's nicely visual.

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This is a good moment, shall we hug?
:iconanya-the-strange:
It iz da shizz, blood

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:iconsilhouette-ad:
Lol chaving it large!
:iconanya-the-strange:
B3bo sp3ak innit bab3z?

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